Just for fun: Do you like it? - sweetie tee clearwater, fl
Acid Rain
Granny Low
Old wooden barrel
and filled his watering can.
One day before spraying
its cute daisies
"Not now, honey,
Feel better? "
The daisy is not responding.
(Well, of course not.)
As a grandmother is gone
to break the sound of clay pot.
Taken aback, turns and drops can
speechless.
His white daisies now towers over her
Bright purple and laugh ...
"Grandma ... (JI) ... friend!
Are you sure you have some! "
The daisy has a smile on her nose
Grandmother and fainted.
Friday, February 19, 2010
Sweetie Tee Clearwater, Fl Just For Fun: Do You Like It?
10 comments:
I hope that our dear beloved grandmother is very good. I will miss if it is not. If all goes well, then it is a great poem, with a fantastic play on words in the title that most people should have caught. Here, too, hope that this is a grandmother of fiction. I enjoyed your acid rain, and it was a trip.
aww poor grandmother! it would be a strange sight. . . reminds me of "Little Shop of Horrors"
Thats what I think the movie is called. . . Anyway! I think Daisy is a nice little (big). . . Although my grandmother did not vanish = P
Loved it .... That fits perfectly with my early years. I am 48 years and truly understand the "acid rain" title. It was "too nice". The "big house" Daisy speaks for itself. You can make your poems and the picture, it is clear to create. It was nice and funny. I really enjoyed it! It has a welcoming smile on my face, very sad! Thank you!
Well, I'm afraid to go into the garden ..... Ah, now I see the title - it's Roach Clip Flippin again, I see. Thank God.
little suggestion .... Words, "break" instead of "break" - is better.
Dude and replace the man - and then to implement the rhyme of "power" is
Bravo again.
I love it! It is so unexpected, and adds a charm to such a story so well by the poem.
This reminds me of Alice in Wonderland - and it's not bad!
T.
Well. How to kill the grandmother. What Grandma Daisy forever anyway.
Margarita was the thankless bad. ha.this did was just for fun. It makes little sense.
A perspective in first person? Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds kind of tomorrow? lol screening Magic in you! Read pleasant.
Poor Grandma, she is amazing. Does heat stroke, the work in the garden in the summer heat.
Need any additional nutrients and TLC had been given. May be OH - small projects for pets monster. ;-) ♥
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